Sweet and sensual, yet so outwardly shy I cannot help but love you I do not ask why My heart beats as your eyes look at me From this sweet prison I never wish to be free
Sensual and sexual, feminine and demure My eternal oxymoron of a love divinely pure Your love feeds my hunger, drives my desire Sate me my angel, set my soul on fire
Black Sabbath Black Sabbath were a rock band formed in Birmingham, UK, in 1968 by Tony Iommi (guitarist), Bill Ward (drummer), Geezer Butler (bassist) and Ozzy Osbourne (vocalist). Cited as pioneers of the heavy metal the band helped define the genre.
Planet Caravan Album: Paranoid Date: 1970 Genre: Psychedelic Rock
Lyrics by Anthony Frank Iommi, John Osbourne, Terence Michael Butler, and WT Ward
We sail through endless skies Stars shine like eyes The black night sighs
The moon in silver trees Falls down in tears Light of the night
The Earth, a purple blaze Of sapphire haze In orbit always
While down below the trees Bathed in cool breeze Silver starlight breaks down the night And so we pass on by the crimson eye Of great god Mars As we travel through the universe
Created by Scott J Alcorn Structure: 2 sestets with a cross rhymed couplet (the cross rhyme is in the 2nd to 4th syllable in each of the two lines of the couplet). Also there is a cross rhyme in the first line of the 2nd sestet (between the 2nd to 4th syllable), tying the 1st sestet to the 2nd Meter: Octosyllabic or tetrameter Schema: aabccb, (b)ddeffe, (e)g (g)e
Example
Miles Away by Scott J Alcorn
A thousand miles away- I hear, your soft whispered voice so clear. The gentle hush, of evening’s sigh- Yet alas, you’re so far away. My heart yearns and drifts where it may, a longing I cannot deny. So down I lie- night slowly falls and in dreams I restlessly call. Yet, you’re not there to hear the plea. Oh, how my heart weeps in longing… Pervasive, tangible, yearning… You’re still a thousand miles from me. Distance I see- in between. My love, unseen, and miles from me
Inspired by the movie ‘The Dead Poets Society’ cousins Jason and Richard Wilkins formed their own society of poets and from their challenges Richard created the Rictameter in 1990-91. Based on the concept of a cinquain and its functionality without restrictions other than format the popularity of the form has spread. With no rhyme or meter there is only a strict adherence to the syllable count. Like the cinquain the Rictameter has a two syllable increment with each line, and a two syllable closure. However the Rictameter doesn’t stop at eight syllables it continues with a line of ten syllables then decreases each line by two syllables until the closure. The closure is a repeat of line one. The syllable count is as follows – 2R, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2R
Example
Here is the very first one by Rich Wilkins;
Treasure Placed in your view So close but out of reach Torturous to all your senses For they each cry aloud to possess it Their desires forever unquenched For the things some want most They cannot have Treasure
and his cousin Jason Wilkins’ response
Satin As your lips are Pressed to mine as velvet Soft and full with rounded sweetness Two gentle petals alive with the night Misted in the summer beauty Of rains that shower love ‘Pon your lips of Satin
Sat on the edge of the bed watching silently staring at you wanting to kiss you wanting to leave my mark so you know I love you I see your eyes widen as I coat my lips in molten wax before kissing your forehead like a seal a perfect mark of red wax I know you feel the warmth of wax and kiss slowly downward as a red flush covers your face and on to your shoulders my kisses running their course the course of desire the course of fire and I lay down beside you knowing you know how much I need you because you will always know in the proof of my lips.
This was the house with the old kettle squatting short and fat on the rayburn, a singing throat gurgling to be lifted with care from the hot plate. Oil fire constant within arm’s reach. Shall we have another cup of tea?
I celebrate your beauty with my eyes In naked flesh there can be no disguise My hunger surging within my blood; deep Within me this need comes as no surprise The primal touch that bids the heart to leap To take a chance that love has found its keep Inside each other’s arms throughout the night As in our passion’s glow we drift to sleep Can love be the sensuous divine light And a kiss the gentle word of invite That draws me close until I breathe you in When in the morning sun we reunite And as we lay here again, skin on skin It is in your love my heartbeats begin