Words (RDP)

Inspired by and written for Ragtag Daily Prompt – my thanks to Perpetua

From my point of view words that are not clean are those that deceive and betray trust because they leave a foul stain that cannot be cleaned

Form: Dodoitsu

tender expressions of love
wiped in a moment of rage
trust betrayed in anger is
still forever lost

©JezzieG2023

Pessimistic (YDWP)

Inspired by and written for Your Daily Word Prompt – with thanks to Sheryl

Definition: Pessimistic – adj. tending to see the worst aspect of things or believe that the worst will happen

Form: Dodoitsu

they say to think positive
to see the good side of things
when experience says not
you’re a gloomy sod
but seeing what can go wrong
before it all collapses
makes us think things out twice
as none can play god

©JezzieG2023

Cusp (RDP)

Inspired by and written for Ragtag Daily Prompt – my thanks to Tracy

Definition: Cusp – n. a point of transition between two different states; a pointed end where two curves meet

Form: Dodoitsu

at the edge of decision
destiny points in all ways
in options of what could be
but which one is right?

©JezzieG2023

Wallop (YDWP)

Inspired by and written for Your Daily Word Prompt – my thanks to Sheryl

Definition: Wallop – v. strike or hit very hard; n. alcoholic drink, especially beer

Form: Dodoitsu

down the pub one over eight
nit-picking quarrels tempers lost
punching out, a bloody nose
that’s called a good night

©JezzieG2023

Dodoitsu Notes

A Japanese form, the Dodoitsu was developed at the end of the Edo Period. It has no meter nor rhyme constraints, instead, the focus is on syllables. The poem consists of four lines with 7-syllables in lines 1, 2, and 3 and 5-syllables in line 4. The Dodoitsu often utilizes the themes of love or work.

Example

Smile of Enchantment by JezzieG

She walks by with elegance,
and beauty captures my eye
with a smile of enchantment—
I adore geisha

Deliberate (YDWP)

Inspired by and written for Your Daily Word Prompt – my thanks to Sheryl

Definition: Deliberate – adj. done consciously and intentionally; v. engage in long and careful consideration

Synonyms: intentional, calculated, conscious, on purpose, intended,

Form: Dodoitsu

accidental happens once
next time is intentional
and the next done with purpose
oh yes you meant it!

©JezzieG2023

Sand (RDP)

Inspired by and written for Ragtag Daily Prompt – my thanks to Drkottaway

Definition: Sand – n. a loose granular substance, typically pale yellowish brown, resulting from the erosion of siliceous and other rocks and forming a major constituent of beaches, river beds, the seabed, and deserts

Synonyms: beach, sands, shore, seaside, seashore, foreshore

Form: Dodoitsu

walking the shore lost in thought
following footprints in sand
or the trails within my mind
walking memories

©JezzieG2023

Tenacious (WOTD)

Inspired by Word of the Day

Definition: Tenacious – adj. holding together; not easily pulled asunder; tough.

Synonyms: firm, tight, strong, unshakeable,

Form: Dodoitsu

hang in there and stay on track
no looking back stay focused
use that stubborn streak to win
then relax, have fun

©JezzieG2023

(What) Phantom (JustJoJan)

Inspired by and written for JustJoJan – thank you, Tuba

Given the antonyms that have been thrown up for the word “Phantom,” I prefer the idea of phantoms to the alternative

Definition: Phantom – n. a ghost, a figment of imagination,

Opposite or Antonyms: void, nothingness, vacancy, emptiness, blank

Form: Dodoitsu

in voids of reality
where the nothingness is real
blank minds imagine nothing -
I need the phantoms!

©JezzieG2023

Severe (WOTDC)

Inspired by and written for Word of the Day Challenge – thank you, Cyranny

Definition: Severe – adj. (of something bad or undesirable) very great; intense; (of punishment of a person) strict or harsh

Form: Dodoitsu

breaking rules what to expect
bleak feelings mixed with harsh words
sentence passed so do the time
or don’t do the crime

©JezzieG2023

Constellation (Just Jo Jan)

Inspired by and written for Just Jo Jan – thank you, Willow

Well, this is gonna have to be good, innit? Constellation, January – I’m a Goatfish

Definition: Constellation – n., destiny, pattern

Form: Dodoitsu

Tropic of Capricorn shines
rising in ascendancy
spinning his wheel of fortune
as written by stars
Not denying any of that

©JezzieG2023