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Inspired by and written for Weekly Prompts Wednesday Challenge – thank you GC and Suem and my apologies I think this one got itself lost in my editing files Form: Ottava Rima A sense of fun lightens the dayReading memes while drinking teaMixing work with a little playMischief making comes for freeSparkling eyes give nothing … Continue reading I Know Him Well (WPWC)
Inside the chaos breached the no-stress Carefully planned now messed up out of sight The king is coming and nothing is right
Inspired by and written for What Do You See – thank you, Sadje Experimental ArtistForm: Octave Inherent beauty out of paperYet still the artist has paintSo she tested a different caperIn true artistic fashion so quaintIn splotches of brushwork’s taperA rainbow of colour acquaintAs stylized as any haute couture draperUntil mama saw her little saint … Continue reading Experimental Artist
In ink the words of a poet’s dream Releases the musings of the inner child That wanders the path beside the stream At one with nature and the call of the wild
The Italian Octave is not as popular but has similar origins to the Haiku, in that originally they were both openings to longer pieces of poetry, The Italian Octave originated as the opening of the 14-line Petrarchan Sonnet and was followed by a 6-line sestet. Each stanza consists of 8 pentameter or decasyllabic lines with … Continue reading Italian Octave Notes
A very old French verse form the Huitain consists of one eight-line stanza composed of ten-syllable lines. The verse is written over three rhymes and the two popular rhyme schemes are as follows: ababbcbcandabbaacac Example Be thou like a rose by Ryter Roethicle Be thou like a Rose my belovedLet not thy thorns keep me … Continue reading Huitain Notes
Too long drifting without hope nor desire My heart broken and life starting to fray...
The memories return with the autumn leaves And love's old bruises burn in echoes of pain...
The Cyrch a Chwta is a Welsh poetic form, and like many of the Welsh forms consists of both end-of-line rhymes and internal rhymes. The Cyrch a Chwta is an octave stanza consisting of 7-syllable lines. Lines 1-6 and line 8 share an end rhyme. Line 7 cross rhymes with either the third, fourth, or … Continue reading Cyrch A Chwta Notes
The old demons descended like a black cloud Surrounding my heart deep inside their darkest shroud...
Sadness explodes with my breathing and the tears flow with lonely words. The images of love are leaving like the flight of the birds. Is anything in life so naive as this life lost in lover’s lore? The heart broken with no reprieve, yet still I love you more...
The Spenserian Stanza is a stanza form invented by the English poet Edmund Spenser for his epic poem The Fairie Queene. Each stanza consist if eight lines of iambic pentameter or decasyllabic lines followed by one line in iambic hexameter or twelve syllables.The rhyme scheme is as follows ababbcbcc dedeefeff ghghhihii and so on Example … Continue reading Spenserian Stanza Notes
Another Italian form popular with sonneteers is the Sicilian Octave. Originally it would have had no set meter, although iambic pentameter is currently popular. The octave has the following rhyme scheme: abababab Example Nightingale by Ryter Roethicle I am a nightingale and a singer of the truthThis flower is my symbol and my love.Each night … Continue reading Sicilian Octave Notes
Old-fashioned beauty kissed by morning dew, In summer-rain her dreams reflect the sun, And poets ponder magic she can do...
Ill-mannered weather insulting the skin Echoes of rudeness the forecaster’s smile A beautiful day for taking it in...
Form: Italian Octave 2 The masts chatter casually on the breezeFrom where there have been to where they will goThe trials and tribulations that flowAnd how the ever-changing tides at easeAs the weather-worn hands tack to the windTo follow the stars to a distant landThe white sails on the course he had plannedAns time shines … Continue reading White Sails
The Ottava Rima is a popular octave for long poetry. There is no set meter to the eight lines. The rhyme schema is abababccExample Into the Horizon by Jez Farmer Beneath the burning skies I watched the sun,Into the horizon it gently fell,While clouds of dreams, their magic begun,Enchantments woven in a dusky spell,As sunset's … Continue reading Ottava Rima Notes
An Octave is any eight-line poetry form of which there are a wide variety. Most of these forms are discussed in various poetic form notes but octaves with couplets, blank verse, free verse, and the more unusual rhyming patterns such as interior rhyme, beginning of line rhyme are largely ignored. So this is for those … Continue reading Octave Notes
Consisting of two Italian quatrains the Italian octave was used by Petrarch in his poetry. Originally there was no set form or line length and Petrarch used it as a basis for his poems including his sonnets. Spenser later formalised it to iambic pentameter with a rhyme schematic of abbaabba However, English is not a … Continue reading Italian Octave Notes
A very old French verse form the Huitain consists of one eight-line stanza composed of ten-syllable lines. The verse is written over three rhymes and the two popular rhyme schemes are as follows:ababbcbcandabbaacac Example Be thou like a rose by Ryter Roethicle Be thou like a Rose my belovedLet not thy thorns keep me away.When … Continue reading Huitain Notes
Meter: Meter of first line sets the tempoStructure: Minimum two octavesRhyme Scheme: ababcdcdD or abababaB The canzonetta is a variation of the canzone. It consists of at least two octaves, each using a series of alternating couplets. The last line or phrase is repeated in each subsequent stanza. Example: Hot Summer Nights by Terry Clitheroe … Continue reading Canzonetta Notes
Octaves are widely known in their strict forms of variant metered rhyme schemas. However, they can also be eight-line stanzas that use one or more alternative poetic devices such as: syllable count, internal rhyme, a couplet in each stanza, meter and so on. For my example I have worked in Iambic Diameter, any rhymes are … Continue reading Octave
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