Created by: Jose Rizal M. Reyes
Structure: Three quatrains and a couplet
Meter: Pentameter or decasyllabic
Rhyme Scheme: abbb ccbb ddbb ee, b rhymes are feminine
Example
Poppy’s Pride by Larry Eberhart
The poppy probably does feel it’s blessed
when pondering the universal quest
for beauty by the bards of creatures human.
You don’t deny they think, I’m now assumin’.
“No thorns have I dissuading roaming beasts
yet I’m not favored as a bovine feast.
I’m not as fragrant smelling as is cumin.
I serve to honor killed and missing crewmen,
…and soldiers lost in battles everywhere.
who, fakes upon their lapels proudly wear.
I reject the very thought of doom and
expect that happiness ought be resuming.
For like draws like, and thus most naturally
I often find it peering down at me
I do like this poem! Its great 🙂
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Larry was a bit special, sadly missed as a friend and poet
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There’s something about the rhymes in this tgar really speaks to me. It seems simple and “ditty like” but it is actually quite profound and thought provoking 👍
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Thank you, I agree but I think Larry had a real talent for making it look easy then wham it hits your mind
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Yes indeed. Powerful stuff
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Reblogged this on A Garret Poet.
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