Inspired by and written for Simply 6 Minutes – thank you, Christine
Another Rob Gonslaves painting puts a grin on my face, I think I am not the only fan of his illusionary art. That doesn’t mean this will be easy and no way this sonnet will be done in 6 minutes but let’s see how it goes.
Sweet Dreams
Form: 12 Step Sonnet 2
‘Good night, my child, may all your dreams be sweet
Let the day go to shadows of the night’
Soft words whispered behind the bedside lamp
As my eyes close I feel cold on my feet
Hidden beneath sheets within the dim light
The feather soft pillows begin to feel damp
I sit up in my bed breathing the breeze
While pulling up my warm blanket of snow
I hear the rustling of white trimmed trees
And look to the light for the way to go
A child again in a world at its ease
Ready to play wherever the winds blow
Imagination in a land of dreams
There is nothing here that is what it seems
Word count: 117
Time: 18 minutes and 20 seconds, just slightly faster than last week
©JezzieGFarmer2022
Fantastic! The ending is perfect but also breaks the trance of reading and pops you back into a reality.
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With the world as it is I’d rather live in the surreal world most of the time. Thanks for an awesome prompt.
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Reblogged this on Stine Writing.
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Thank you for the reblog, much appreciated
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The imagery is just fantastic. Really enjoyed it
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Thank you, Pam
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Beautifully penned!
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Thank you
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You’re welcome!
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